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  • WhytManga Profile 7 hours ago WhytManga responded to a comment about Freedom Day.
    very constructive, i like. sano's teleporting will be explained later, explaining it now would not really add to the chapter IMO. the poop joke was a wiiwerth characteristic that will re-occur, but i guess its not for everyone..lool. your suggestion with the map joke may have been funnier but also may have not been funny at all, thats really not critism, thats more of "your opinion", cause who knows, that might not be funny. I do agree that the invisibility cloak thing was risky, but then again I didnt explain how it worked, anything from there on would just be assumptions, In this chapter I left out explaining things would not add to the chapter, whatever explanation i gave, I felt was enough that why things are the way they are, but i will definitely get into more detail in later chapters. as for backgrounds using a lil more tone? thats also more of a suggestion and not criticsm, I don't tone bgs "much" in my style. Thnx for reading and the feedback, much appreciated and considered.
    FrankieDF-Kun Profile FrankieDF-Kun previously said: (part 2)
    The poop joke got a little old but then again I'm not a fan of those kinda jokes. It's probably the scans but the lines look a bit uneven and messy (again it could be the scans of the pages) I know you also toned it in MS4 or MS5 right? so maybe its because you put it in there or something of the sort probably happen. Maybe your not as good inker as we thought? Nah! Some of the backgrounds could use some tone but looks pretty nice over all. It would've been funny to see the map Sano had and have it look very simple then panned back to the joke of him not being good at reading maps to add a bit of more humor to the overall joke. The invisibility cloaks (totally didn't need to look up on the page to spell it, not at all) at the end was a little out of left field and almost dangerous to mention them because you got to make sure that the story could used them realistically/carefully cause a lot would say "Why not use the DAMN INVISIBILITY CLOAKS TO HIDE!" but overall really good
  • WhytManga Profile 8 hours ago WhytManga became a fan of animate test almost finished version.
    animate test almost finished version
    animate test almost finished version just need to add the thing he's dragging with his hand.
  • WhytManga Profile 8 hours ago WhytManga became a fan of STOP Working for Free.
    STOP Working for Free I've known a few artists around here lately who've been getting roped into 'working' for other people, the work is often free and has no real substance behind it, it's quite sad really. Unfortunately I was the same up until recently, I thought as an artist I had to work for free to get exposure and get notice... it didn't work. Everything I did for free I got nothing for in return, and guess what? That makes PERFECT SENSE! You work for free, you get NOTHING! The fact is, if someone asks you to do artwork for them and they're not willing to pay you for it or at least repay time wasted if the project goes to hell, then either A. The person does not have anything of value for you, the artist, to work on or with. B. The person does not have any respect for you or your art. I hear you say what if person is a talented writer but just hasn't the means to pay an artist? C. The person lacks integrity and dedication to improve his own skills so that he doesn't need to hire anyone else. Believing they are entitled to anything from you for free suggests they don't believe you to have skill or talent worth rewarding, it's an insult! They don't value anything about you! And if they don't value you then that's a good indication they have no faith in your work, or the project as a whole, which means you will not get anything out of it except wasted time and effort.   I saw this video recently which is a rant more than anything, by Stephen Silver, a character designer who worked on Kim Possible and other shows.   So artists, if you value yourselves, make it clear that you're worth something, you won't get anywhere by treading timidly in the background hoping someone gives you a break.
  • WhytManga Profile 8 hours ago WhytManga made a comment about C_Kaizer.
    thanx for faving Apple Black lad!
  • WhytManga Profile 8 hours ago WhytManga made a comment about SIN.
    gratz on 2000 fans, i know its not really the point but it great to see...:)
  • Eco Sky Profile 12 hours ago Eco Sky became a fan of KoiZu.
  • WhytManga Profile 13 hours ago WhytManga responded to a comment about Freedom Day.
    thanx man!
    Kero Profile Kero previously said: you're always as epic as ever whyt. xD
  • WhytManga Profile 13 hours ago WhytManga responded to a comment about Freedom Day.
    Nope, ur wrong, google it my friend, i spelled it correctly, there are officially 3 ways to spell feces, faeces and i forgot the last one.
    newartist2012 Profile newartist2012 previously said: spelled feces wrong my friend where symon is holding his nose
  • WhytManga Profile 13 hours ago WhytManga made a comment about _KKLJ_.
    thanx for the fanning!..:)
  • WhytManga Profile 13 hours ago WhytManga made a comment about Kero.
    thnx 4 fannig ma manga "Apple Black"
  • WhytManga Profile 1 day ago WhytManga became a fan of Amy Moon.
  • WhytManga Profile 2 days ago WhytManga made a comment about Saigami.
    starts very well, waiting for more.
  • WhytManga Profile 2 days ago WhytManga became a fan of Saigami.
    Saigami
    Saigami Have you ever felt so lonely that you just wanted to leave everything behind? If you would have the opportunity, could you take the step to change your life? Hanasaki Ayumi is a withdrawn, timid girl with a life as empty as it can be. But one day she recieves a letter which will lead her out of her meaningless everydays. With an unexpected turn of events she ends up in a unknown world full of unbelievable things. She encounters people with strange powers and even stranger creatures - for an average girl like her this place ain't feel right, so she sets on a journey with two adventure seeker boy, to find a way home. Tough as the journey goes on the unthinkable happens and from that moment Ayumi has the deal with the hardest questions in her life: who is she actually and where does she belong? Update on every Monday.
  • WhytManga Profile 2 days ago WhytManga became a fan of Seny.
    Seny
    Seny My name's Seny and I'm a mangaka from Hungary. I have two published one shot manga in my country, one of them is Prince, the boy who never lived... - published by Fumax Comics(2009), and the other one is CosPlayBoy published in AnimeStars magazine(2010). Currently I'm working on my long "dream-manga" called Saigami, and I also reactivated myself as a How-to artist on YouTube.   My goal is to reach as many people trough my stories as possible all around the world. My youtube channel for tutorials and manga making videos: http://www.youtube.com/user/saigamiproject Follow me on twitter for updates and wip: https://twitter.com/saigamiproject    
  • WhytManga Profile 2 days ago WhytManga responded to a comment about WhytManga.
    good for you!..:)
    Natsumusey Profile Natsumusey previously said: Very good, you inspire me. I'm going to be a Manga artist as well, and i'll never give up >:)
  • WhytManga Profile 2 days ago WhytManga made a comment about Everyone is subject to tears.
    creepy ..lol
  • WhytManga Profile 2 days ago WhytManga became a fan of Everyone is subject to tears.
  • WhytManga Profile 2 days ago WhytManga made a comment about Apple Black Fanart ( whytManga Tournament ).
    MARRIIAAAH!! haha, hilarious yo, nice entry.
  • WhytManga Profile 2 days ago WhytManga became a fan of Apple Black Fanart ( whytManga Tournament ).
    Apple Black Fanart ( whytManga Tournament )
    Apple Black Fanart ( whytManga Tournament ) I was listening to Gentleman while reading Apple Black and sketching the characters in that manga.
  • WhytManga Profile 2 days ago WhytManga responded to a comment about Freedom Day.
    closer to the screen
    Talia Mamane Profile Talia Mamane previously said: Is that arm naturally large? In the other pages it looked like a normal sized arm... It looks sorta big hhere

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