ComicVeggies: Exercise #01 Critique

The first round of ComicVeggies has ended! Thanks to everyone who participated and created such awesome entries!

I did notice that a lot of the participants had trouble with the profile view and making it consistent betwixt the other two angles. I have to wonder if part of that was my fault for collapsing the skull a bit in the template. The template was meant to be used more for measuring the placement of the features between faces rather than an accurate representation of a skull. For that, I apologize. We’ll remedy this in another exercise on the head.

In this entry by Ennun, we have a very distinctive character with very fine linework. From the frontal view, the character looks to be a strong-willed man of about 20 years with wide-set eyes and a strong jaw. It’s drawn very well, but when it’s compared to the 3/4 view, the character feels like two separate characters, or at least two different ages.

A lot of rounding went on in the cheeks of the 3/4 view, and the mouth lowered itself closer to the chin, making the character feel younger. This can be fixed by using sharper lines with the cheeks, widening the mouth and moving it more directly under the nose, and squaring up the jawline.

The profile is also very well drawn, but this is where I noticed a lot of people collapsing the skull. judging by the positioning of the hair on the original drawing, the back of the head is flattened. I realize that on my original template, I did the same thing. It’s a really tough thing to watch out for! D:

 

That’s all for this exercise, everybody! The critiqued entry was chosen at random, but if you would like your entry to be red-lined and critiqued, please let us know and we shall do so.

Thanks again to everyone who made this first exercise so successful! Make sure to check out everyone’s exercises below.

 

In the next week or so, we’ll be starting exercise #2! Just a heads-up: It’s all about hands!

ashikai

About ashikai

Ashikai is a Community Manager for MM.net, Co-founder of the resource group Manga-Apps, and artist for the original series, Shamrock. Interested in contributing to the blog? have feedback or comments about MM.net? Send her an email!

MM.net’s New Website Feature Overview

Hey folks! I’m sure everyone’s noticed by now that MM has been slowly releasing parts of the new website to the public. There’s still a lot of work to do before the whole site is finished, but in the meantime, let’s take a look at what’s new!

THE FRONT PAGE

The new front page is completely different from the old version. Gone is the live feed and the tabbed browsing. Instead, the front page is split into five sequential sections: Artist Spotlight, Trending, Premium, Featured, and Blog Features.

 

 

 

 

ARTIST SPOTLIGHT

The Artist Spotlight is an opportunity for certain artists’ work to be displayed prominently. The spotlight changes regularly, so do make an effort to check out the artists as they rotate in.

We’ve also made it very easy for you to search for new comics (on all three tiers) by Genre. You suggested this feature, and we listened!

 

 

 

TRENDING, PREMIUM AND FEATURED

These three sections replace the “Manga and Comics” tab on the old site. Trending comics will always be from the member tier and are rotated regularly, but not in the order that they’ve updated. Premium and Featured comics are displayed in the order in which they were last updated.

 

 

 

 

BLOG FEATURES

There are only two blogs that can be displayed at any time. On the left are official posts from the MM blog. This blog includes artist interviews, activities, contests, and official announcements.

On the right is a highlighted blog entry written by one of our Premium or Featured artists that we thought was totally cool, insightful, or helpful!

THE DASHBOARD

The Dashboard is now where you will find a live feed of updated comics, illustrations, comments, discussions, blogs, and more! We tried to make it as easy as possible to see which comics updated recently so you can keep up to date with your favorites with ease!

To get to your Dashboard, just look for your username in the top-right corner of any page on MM. Right next to your name you’ll see an option to go to your Dashboard.

 

 

THE FEED

Taking up the majority of the Dashboard is a complete revamped version of the live feed. By default, the feed displays everything you could possibly want to know about the latest activity on your watch list. That means that activity from any member Profile you Fan will appear here.

At the top of the feed, you will also be notified of any new pages that were uploaded to series that you read. This notification is based on where you last left the series so if you did not finish reading to the latest page, you will see a notification even though there might not have been new pages uploaded.

Notice the filter options on the left? Those give you the ability to customize what you see when you visit your Dashboard. The number below each heading indicates how many activities of that type have occurred since you last visited your dashboard. They disappear when you click on that heading.

 

COMMENTS AND FANS

On the right side of the Dashboard, you’ll see an overview of your profile. Your profile gives you a quick idea of your stats including how many fans, illustrations, blogs, and mini-store items you have, plus how many fans your manga/comics have, your translations, and your watch list.

Your fan-count is being treated a little differently in this new iteration of the site. Instead of counting how many people have fanned your profile, your fan count includes a cumulative total of every person who’s fanned anything that you’ve posted. In my case, I have 248 different people who have fanned at least one thing that I have posted. This includes the fans from my comics and illustrations as well.

Your watch list only lists the amount of user profiles you’ve fanned and does not include any other numbers from illustrations or comics.

Now you’ll notice that next to Fans and Comments there’s a small number. That number represents how many fans or comments you’ve received since your last visit. To view them, you can click on the number or the heading (fans or comments).

 

 

When you click on the number or heading, a modal window pops up with a feed. In this case, I clicked Fans, and I have a list of one person who has become my fan since my last visit.

Here I have the option to to do a few things. Since I am not currently a fan of BakaGundam, I’m given the open to fan their profile by clicking Add to Favorite. I can also leave a comment on their profile by clicking Reply.

Something important to note about comments and fans is that you have to dismiss each item if you don’t want it to appear on your Dashboard. This way, you can dismiss certain notifications and leave others to check out later. There’s also a handy little Dismiss All button so you don’t have to dismiss each item individually.

 

 

 

ADDING AND EDITING CONTENT

To make a new Comic, Illustration, Mini-Store item, Blog, or Translation, you need only to look at the top of your Dashboard. For the time being, you can only update an already existing comic by visiting the comic’s profile page.

 

If you have any questions about the new layout or want to leave any feedback for the MM team, leave us a comment! We’d love to hear from you!

 

Happy Comicking!

 

 

ashikai

About ashikai

Ashikai is a Community Manager for MM.net, Co-founder of the resource group Manga-Apps, and artist for the original series, Shamrock. Interested in contributing to the blog? have feedback or comments about MM.net? Send her an email!

Interviews: SIN by Drake Tsui

Drake Tsui, the creator of SIN

This is certainly long overdue, but it’s great to have you here, Drake! Thanks for talking with us!

No problemo!

You’ve been with MangaMagazine since the very beginning with your comic, SIN. How has your experience changed over the last couple of years?

I remember when Foster first contacted me asking if I was interested in having SIN sponsored from MM.net. At the time the entire thing was just this pet project for me to take a shot at sequential art so I was like, “Sure, why not? Getting paid to practice drawing? Awesome.”

Then somehow SIN actually started gaining popularity and so did my interest in storytelling/comics. Suddenly it became a part of my career and one of my most significant projects to date! It’s been a bewildering experience, one that I hope only gets bigger and better :]

Another beautiful illustration by Drake

I’ve seen your workload and it’s pretty intimidating! How do you manage to find the time to work on SIN while juggling all of your other illustration projects?

Oh you know that thing people call a social life? I sure as hell don’t :| Hahaha! But no seriously when you get into the freelance business one of the first things you have to tackle hard is time management. After graduating from Art College I somehow went from a lazy procrastinating teenager to a self-made businessman overnight.

It was a weird transition but being organized and self disciplined definitely has it’s perks. It’s rewarding to be able to tell people I make a good living at home drawing stuff on my computer without the creative constraints that normally comes with having a studio job.

SIN is a pretty unique comic, stylistically. You’ve flawlessly combined the dynamism of western comics with the pacing of eastern comics. Are there any particular works that influenced your storytelling style?

Yea, if there was a formula it’d look something like: Marvel/DC Comics + Shonen Manga = Drake’s lolwriting.

As far as “particular works” go anything with Brian Michael Bendis’s name on it has had a huge influence on my idea of what storytelling could look like. The titles that he writes for Marvel constantly hit a high note for me and in a lot of ways I try to emulate his ability to “entertain” through SIN.

From the East you can bet I read/watched a lot of Manga/Anime growing up. Notable works that have had a huge influence on the development of SIN are Battle Angel Alita (aka GUNNM), Ghost In the Shell (S.A.C. Series), Gundam (Universal Century titles) and probably a lot more I can’t think of at the moment!

Despite it being a classic sci-fy, post-apocalyptic, political battleground comic, SIN is a refreshing read. Where did the original idea come from?

One of the first things I learned as an artist is that there’s no such thing as originality, just an illusion created from careful rehash and remix. So to put a spin on a premise so terribly redundant you have to really identify the elements that make it feel overused and downplay them as much as possible to give other aspects more room to breath.

In SIN‘s case, I decided right off the bat that it had to be very character driven. Everything else about a post apocalyptic sci fi has been told a million times over but the one thing that never gets old is humanization. People will always connect with people.

So for all of it’s grandeur of the world ending, totalitarian governments, assassination, blah, blah, blah, blah… SIN really boils down to it’s characters and making them as authentic and relatable as possible.

SIN is full of wonderfully detailed machinery and backgrounds.

The level of detail present in all of your pages is stunning, especially when it comes to machines and weaponry! How do you go about designing these elements?

Is it? Haha thanks! A couple of my side jobs for the past couple of years consists of Sci Fi Concept Art and you’ll actually notice the earlier designs in SIN are pretty… terrible. As my conceptual skills evolved over the years from those particular jobs I was able to apply them to SIN, in fact you guys will probably notice me constantly redesigning things as the series progresses!

Thirty chapters in, and it feels like you’re just getting started with SIN‘s story. Do you have anything special in store for your readers?

You’re right! The first 30 or so chapters focused a lot on laying groundwork for the protagonists (Kaden & Zerus) now that it’s done I’ve got a ridiculous amount of story arc’s planned out that I can finally get started on. I don’t have anything special in store per-say but hopefully I’ll be able to start moving the plot a little faster for you guys. :]

You’re a pretty avid convention-goer! Is there anything in particular that you enjoy the most about conventions?

Conventions are business trips for me but materialistic gains aside it’s incredibly uplifting to be surrounded by people who enjoy your work. I go to about 10 of these things a year and after awhile you grow numb to the celebrities, panels, merchandise, cosplays etc. but the one thing that never gets old is catching a smile or laugh from someone looking at your work.

I know it’s a whole lot of cheese, but celebrating a fandom I belong to with others is a pretty heart warming experience.

Enyo and Zerus from SIN are featured on the cover of Chapter 30

Is it just me, or would SIN make an awesome video game? I would love to play that game! Any chance one of your video game clients would be interested?

If SIN ever gets popular enough for a video game the first I’d like to see is a Fighting Game! There was a series of games called “Narutimate Hero” on the Playstation 2 for NARUTO, I’d want it to be pretty much exactly like that gameplay/style-wise. At the moment though, SIN doesn’t nearly have enough content/characters for that sort of thing though, haha.

I don’t think a lot of my video game clients even know I’m a comic/manga artist. I might build the confidence to pitch the idea someday, who knows!

It’s been a pleasure talking with you and I’m really looking forward to seeing more from you!

Hey, the pleasure was all mine! Thanks for the interview and I hope my work in the future doesn’t disappoint ;]

ashikai

About ashikai

Ashikai is a Community Manager for MM.net, Co-founder of the resource group Manga-Apps, and artist for the original series, Shamrock. Interested in contributing to the blog? have feedback or comments about MM.net? Send her an email!

New Author Promotions

Happy New Year, everybody! We’re celebrating the dawn of 2013 with some great new author promotions. Be sure to check them out!

Premium Promotion

Witch’s Quarry by Wulfmune

We’re thrilled to welcome Wulfmune to the Premium tier! Her quirky artwork and endearing characters always make for a fun read. Witch’s Quarry is no exception.

Summary:

This is the tale of Sir Veolynn Moreshire’s greatest and strangest achievement. Fate would have her/him led by the whims of a powerful witch. This is what really happened in the Second Great War for Oladuan; when heroes and villains were neither righteous or evil. There were other hidden creatures that placed high stakes in the outcome of the humans’ conflict. And there were a great many funny things that just didn’t go as planned.

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Featured Promotions

Comatose by Chicken Blast

Summary:

Comatose is a drama/sci-fi/action webcomic telling the story of Jack Phoenix, a paranoid teenager with unknown powers, who wakes up and finds life a little stranger than he last left it.

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Fallen by Ogawa Burukku

Summary:

FaLLEN is a darker take on what would really happen if magical girls existed. Genre-defining stereotypes are given new twists and not everyone on the same team gets along. This is not the sparkly girl power mahou shoujo you grew up with!

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Mephistos by Naniiebim

Summary:

What do you do when you have an unusual neighbor? Day in the life living on the edge of the supernatural and normal.

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Turbo Defiant by Dono Sanchez Almara

Summary:

A mighty titan from another universe lives, trapped inside the most ordinary kid on earth. Together they must stop a dangerous conspiracy that aims to merge both worlds and wreak havoc on earth.

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ashikai

About ashikai

Ashikai is a Community Manager for MM.net, Co-founder of the resource group Manga-Apps, and artist for the original series, Shamrock. Interested in contributing to the blog? have feedback or comments about MM.net? Send her an email!

Comic Veggies: by #Manga-Apps and MangaMagazine.net

We here at #Manga-Apps and MangaMagazine.net are excited to bring to you Comic Veggies! A series of fun activities to help you improve your skills as we go into the new year. Every few weeks we will post a new activity for you to complete and share with us. At the end of each two week period, the #Manga-Apps and MangaMagazine.net staff will review and select a representative sample of work and provide expert feedback on areas of improvement. We believe each of these activities you participate in will help improve your skills critical to drawing a great manga!

Here is the first activity: Draw a face from three different angles

One of the most challenging things to draw is a face due to the amount of detail necessary to bring the face to life. Maintaining consistency across three different angles adds additional difficulty

How do I participate?

  1. Draw a face from three different angles using the template below. A great place to start for tutorials and guidance is: http://manga-apps.deviantart.com/gallery/24266193
  2. Create an account on Mangamagazine.net
  3. Upload your image as an illustration to the site with the title “Comic Veggie: Faces”

Template:

 

Right click to save the image to your computer.

When does this activity start and finish? This activity starts on January 2nd and ends on January 16th!

We look forward to seeing your work!

The Manga-Apps and MangaMagazine team

 

About Victor

Co-Founder of MangaMagazine.net Permanent site stalker :)